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full ViEW! or suffer my wrath of cuddly hugs of DOOM! :o

EDIT: Since I've been away from my PC for so long and no updates latly I figured out I could post this updated look on this picture, I did before I left. Here I've improved the stuff people have commented on.
- the boots on the rebel are now slightly bigger. (should they be even bigger?)
- I updated some of the background now with black borders.. (should I lose the borders or perhaps change the colour?)


Anyhow this is :iconphantom612:'s 9999hit gift back when I hit the 10k mark. he wished for his Jackal to be drawn both as a ninja and as a rebel and it sure was fun to draw^^
I'm really pleased with how the colouring came out on both characters.. the layout is another story thouhg.. :|

I really appresiate any kind of critique about how I can improve the layout. I don't know how to draw cool layouts so some tips would be highly appresited =)

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:iconjanboruta:
Instant fave! I've got nothing more to say than I see some really great improvement in your skills. The poses and the texture of fur are very neat. Keep it up! :)

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:iconpyrosity:
I agree with Jan, the fur does look very nice! It's cool to see you improving step by step :)

The layout is pretty good, I think what's holding it back is the lack of any physical background, so the poses look a bit odd. But other than that, I like it :D

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:iconspitzen:
Sweetnesses! They sure are here for some good ol' combat! :)

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:iconpicomark4:
:wow: :jawdrop: Awesome!

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"I don't suffer from insanity, I enjoy every minute of it!"--Edgar Allen Poe
:iconfirereign:
Wow! Impressive coloring job you've got going on here! :clap: Simply fantastic, very in depth.

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SWORDS!!! AND AN RPG!!! NOWAI!!!!

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CAN SOMEONE EXPLAIN TO ME WHO DECIDED IT WAS A SMART IDEA TO NOT ALLOW PEOPLE TO EDIT THEIR SIGNATURE BEYOND ONE LETTER!?!?!?!?!
:iconsikes:
nice~! i like the pose the ninja version is in.
if i may make one crit. the feet on the reb are abit small, other than that, nice work!

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:iconblastit:
Good stuff. Nice colour choices. Yay, jackal RPG squad!

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:icongecko8940k:
Impressive!! i realy love the coloring and the bg thing

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:jedi:'Till next time our Sabers clash:jedi:

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