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YES!!
I finally managed to finish my very first finish comic about my guerrilla soldier group bent on freeing their country of relentless dictators.
However freedom fighting does take TIME and resources so in the meanvile scenes like this one occurs
Pablo (the bear) is Levi (blue lizard) and Steins (the red fox) commander if anyone wonders^^
so I hope someone might find it atleast somewhat funny
but yea feel free too give me some good critique about the comic layout.. I've got hardly any experience in this..
Levi is ~leviathan248's character, rest are mine
Edit:oh and special thanks for ~leviathan248 who helped me comming up with this comic idea!
Edit2: I've update, the layout on the comic and added a title to the comic^^
YES!!
I finally managed to finish my very first finish comic about my guerrilla soldier group bent on freeing their country of relentless dictators. However freedom fighting does take TIME and resources so in the meanvile scenes like this one occurs
Pablo (the bear) is Levi (blue lizard) and Steins (the red fox) commander if anyone wonders^^
so I hope someone might find it atleast somewhat funny
but yea feel free too give me some good critique about the comic layout.. I've got hardly any experience in this..
Levi is ~leviathan248's character, rest are mine
Edit:oh and special thanks for ~leviathan248 who helped me comming up with this comic idea!
Edit2: I've update, the layout on the comic and added a title to the comic^^
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Overall
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Technique ImpactThe subtleties in this comic that build up to the amusing end really help to sell the element of irony <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="334" title="Nod"/>. The scene is very stage-like in its setup and ultimate climax. The way the bear is sitting so nonchalantly, until the conversation catches his ear, and his reaction to the soldiers is pure comic genius <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g…" width="17" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="100" title="Giggle"/>Another technique I admire is how clearly I can picture this scene happening, even in everyday life.
I myself wasn't all too sure where this comic would lead when I first read it, and upon finishing it, I found that I was beside myself with laughter. This comic clearly demonstrates your mastery at dry, subtle humor! Keep up the splendid work!